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Updated - 03-31-2015
Mostly grammar corrections and sorting out a few things some how missed the last time I read through it. Ditched a few sentences, made a few others. It should read better now.
Now I just have to remember to update the single chapters.
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Love's story has come to an end.
I have organized all the chapters, added a bit of colour, bookmarked the chapters and give it an extra one. More like 4 pages of boyxboy action, but let's just call it a chapter shall we?
It's in .pdf form. If you don't know what that is and you don't have acrobat installed on your computer, here is a smaller lighter version that will let you see/read the file. www.foxitsoftware.com/download…
Comments and reviews on the last Postscript chapter are to be posted here along with your over all review and comment of the story.
If you find a mistake let me know and I'll fix it. Also all chapters are bookmarked to help save time finding where the chapters start and end.
Enjoy.
Here is the link to the first chapter. fav.me/d2qdp7p if you want to read each chapter by itself for some reason.
Mostly grammar corrections and sorting out a few things some how missed the last time I read through it. Ditched a few sentences, made a few others. It should read better now.
Now I just have to remember to update the single chapters.
==
Love's story has come to an end.
I have organized all the chapters, added a bit of colour, bookmarked the chapters and give it an extra one. More like 4 pages of boyxboy action, but let's just call it a chapter shall we?
It's in .pdf form. If you don't know what that is and you don't have acrobat installed on your computer, here is a smaller lighter version that will let you see/read the file. www.foxitsoftware.com/download…
Comments and reviews on the last Postscript chapter are to be posted here along with your over all review and comment of the story.
If you find a mistake let me know and I'll fix it. Also all chapters are bookmarked to help save time finding where the chapters start and end.
Enjoy.
Here is the link to the first chapter. fav.me/d2qdp7p if you want to read each chapter by itself for some reason.
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it took me almost all day to read this, because i kept getting interrupted,
i must say, you did a very good job of adding to the original 3 chapters, the story is really good, i like all the teenage insecurity Love has, and the characters are all very good, awesome job!